untangling the web

poetry about and photography of everyday happenings and sights

6:00 a.m., March 4

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An insistent bark

beside my bed

no longer ignored.

Clothes thrown on,

stumbling out.

Cold air on

sleepy cheeks,

moon through

bare trees,

sun behind

a bank of clouds,

cedar tree

across the path,

the sound

of rushing water.

One lone goose

flies overhead.

Daffodils pushing up,

tender green grass,

woodpecker’s

rat-a-tat-tat,

a dove’s

coo, coo, coo,

distant roar

of a truck.

A green bench

at water’s edge.

A pair of mallards

leap and skid

across the pond

at our approach.

Beginning in the dark,

ending in the light.

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Author: BHW

I am an octogenarian, mother, grandmother, wife, sister, friend, voracious reader, and amateur poet. I am dedicated to keeping both my mind and body active through yoga and tai chi, walks with my dog, rich discussion with my book club and 80+ groups, and numerous other activities. I have a deep curiosity about the world and its inhabitants.

4 thoughts on “6:00 a.m., March 4

  1. elizabeth paschall's avatar

    ❤️❤️👏

    Sent from my iPhone

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  2. Joan's avatar

    Love this, Betty. Especially the closing.

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  3. janehhopkins's avatar

    Loved reading this poem. I felt I was on your walk with you. Thank you for sending it. Jane >

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  4. egleaner's avatar

    what a wonderful place you have for taking your pup for a walk. especially love the last 2 lines!

    blessings, a

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